1st Draft Teacher Feedback

Front Cover Teacher Feedback

• Try making the masthead a bit bigger.
• Make image larger slightly.
• Sort out styling of hair, it needs to look less flyaway in places. 
• Barcode is too big (long).
• Either justify all lines or make the last one the smallest- See fantastic man for help.

Contents Page Teacher Feedback

•  Variety Needed in images across package ( better to have different artists and variety of shot types.
• Need to think about layout- I like it but it's not quite right yet. 
• Text [contents sub-text] needs more impact,

Double Page Spread

• Two/three columns of equal length.
• Not enough text in interview.
• A bit bland should have more impact [subheading].
• A bit heavy [article, first half].
• Make it more about music, to much on hardship in life! [article, first half].
• Blank Space, why?

Overall Teacher Feedback

• Gap at top and bottom [Front Cover] need to be equal- Shrink Bottom.
• New photo- Sleeker hair, no need for camera, softer lighting.
• Look at web address.
• Collumns need to be more balanced. Aligned.